Add final draft of Guix talk.

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@@ -63,18 +63,18 @@
 * What’s wrong with Apt/Yum/Pacman/etc.?
 
   Global state (=/usr=) that prevents *multiple versions* of a package
-  from coexisting
+  from coexisting.
 
-  *Non-atomic* installation, removal, upgrade of software
+  *Non-atomic* installation, removal, upgrade of software.
 
-  No way to *roll back*
+  No way to *roll back*.
 
-  *Nondeterminstic* package builds and maintainer-uploaded binaries
+  *Nondeterminstic* package builds and maintainer-uploaded binaries.
   (though this is changing!)
 
-  Reliance on pre-built binaries provided by a *single point of trust*
+  Reliance on pre-built binaries provided by a *single point of trust*.
 
-  Requires *superuser* privileges
+  Requires *superuser* privileges.
 
 * The problem is bigger
 
@@ -113,14 +113,14 @@
 
 * Problems with configuration management software
 
-  Imperative config management is overly-complex and brittle
+  Imperative config management is overly-complex and brittle.
   (idempotence is hard)
 
-  More reliable builds require spawning new machines and building
-  from scratch each time (sledgehammer)
+  More reliable builds require spawning new machines and building from
+  scratch each time.  (sledgehammer)
 
-  Made primarily for developers for server maintenance, but all users
-  could benefit
+  Made primarily for developers for server maintenance, but all types
+  of users could benefit.
 
 * Docker?
 
@@ -277,8 +277,8 @@
 
   Use cases:
 
-  - Eva and Ben use different versions of Emacs
-  - Eva hacks on 2 Ruby projects that require different versions
+  - Alyssa and Ben use different versions of Emacs
+  - Alyssa hacks on 2 Ruby projects that require different versions
 
 * Atomic
 
@@ -383,7 +383,6 @@
 * Example package recipe
 
   #+latex: \tiny{
-
   #+BEGIN_SRC scheme
     (define-public livestreamer
       (package
@@ -412,7 +411,6 @@
         (home-page "http://livestreamer.io/")
         (license license:bsd-2)))
   #+END_SRC
-
   #+latex: }
 
 * Dependency graph
@@ -425,7 +423,13 @@
 
 * Other user interfaces
 
-  Demo Emacs UI, web prototype
+  Besides the CLI, there’s also an Emacs interface, naturally.
+
+  Proof of concept web interface. (not in Guix core)
+
+* Demo!
+
+  Emacs
 
 * Importing packages
 
@@ -534,7 +538,7 @@
   - 3,000 packages, 4 platforms
   - Guix System Distribution in beta
   - Binaries at http://hydra.gnu.org
-  - tooling: auto-update, “linting”, etc.
+  - Variety of useful tools
 
 * Project status
 
@@ -573,7 +577,7 @@
   - More packages that are reproducible
   - GNOME
   - LVM
-  - Encrypted root
+  - Encrypted root for everyone
 
 * Join us!
 
@@ -589,6 +593,8 @@
   We are currently collecting donations via the FSF to purchase new
   servers for our build farm!
 
+  Since mid-Decemeber, $8,200 USD has been raised.
+
   https://gnu.org/software/guix/donate/
 
 * Join us!
@@ -596,6 +602,14 @@
   Chat with us in the =#guix= channel on Freenode or on the
   =guix-devel@gnu.org= and =help-guix@gnu.org= mailing lists.
 
+* LibrePlanet 2016
+
+  Christopher Webber of the GNU MediaGoblin project and myself will be
+  co-presenting “Solving the Deployment Crisis with GNU Guix” at
+  LibrePlanet 2016 on March 19th or 20th.
+
+  Visit https://libreplanet.org/2016 for full details.
+
 * Thank you!
 
   Visit https://gnu.org/software/guix for source code, documentation,